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Review of Alien  
Review by Salem12
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
I may very well be interpreting this incorrectly, but this kinda seems like an apt description of crippling anxiety and/or depression. Poetry isn't normally my cup of tea, but I did enjoy it though in a sad sort of way, if that makes sense.
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Review of He Said, She Said  
Review by Salem12
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Funny, cute, and a little too real :p. I appreciate you putting the definition of askance in the bottom as I was unfamiliar with the word (totally gonna try and add that to my vernacular by the way) but of course I can't help but wonder if this was based on a real life experience ;)
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Review of Dawn  
Review by Salem12
Rated: E | (4.5)
So first and foremost I absolutely counted the syllables, I was pleased to note you had the proper five, seven, five. I find it uplifting though slightly bittersweet as it reminds me of my grandfathers favorite saying "one day at a time" he was an alcoholic and basically every day the sun came up was a new lease on life for him.
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Review by Salem12
Rated: E | (4.0)
While poetry isn't normally my thing, I found it pleasant with an oh so slightly dark undertone that I appreciated. I am also grateful for the brief explanation of the term "acrostic poetry" given I had no clue what that meant. I also notice that while this bit is from last year I think it fits really well given current events.
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