I really enjoyed reading this poem. I am especially drawn to poems that would be considered protest poems instead of the one that would be considered "emotional." I liked how you played on the schizophrenic theme and the first and last stanzas were completely opposite. I also like the way that you repeated the hook. I find that to be very powerful especially when you have a good hook.
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