you gotta give at least some background for the story dude. and you do know that jerry doesnt have magic anymore and therefore cant summon a changing table?
I'll be honest I found this story while looking for age regression and diaper fetish stuff and from what I've read it almost completely muscle growth. Still decent concept and story :)
I'm sorry and I don't mean to sound like a dick or anything but this story just had way to many choices. Pretty much the story went choice sentence Nother choice next sentence. It was literally impossible to get into just a little less choices and a little more sustenance for the story dude.
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