I love the sentiment of writing to an unborn child. The author in the first paragraph has painted a picture of herself that seems honest as we all have good and bad traits to our personalities.
She is trying to tell the story of herself to her unborn child and I am wondering as the reader why she has chosen to write about her stubbornness instead of wishes and dreams for Frank. I think the second paragraph is in need of editing.
I love the idea of what you are writing I just think you need to expand on your thoughts of what your legacy is going to be for Frank. Overall I enjoyed reading.
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