The Title
I love the title as it really captures the reality of the writer's maundering!
My First Impression
As I read this poem it screams the enormity of every living creature. I believe as humans we haven't been paying attention to such things. Our world seems to be most important. However it is not! The wonders of the world are made of the enormity of all living creatures and their own performance. I wish humans worked as well as the ones such as the coyote chasing the rabbit. They don't question why they do it, is there something better; no they do what they do and keep their world important. Maybe we could learn a little by those that carry on without questioning everything around them. I love the idea of this poem.
The Muses That Inspired Me
I enjoyed the personification used in this poem. This being a free verse poem with out meter or syllable count has value of it's own. A great message.
Conventions I Would Suggest
A couple of things I would suggest but are only suggestions as this is your poem and yours alone.
Every life is
Enormous to itself
No matter how small,
suggestion
Every life is
enormous to itself;
no matter how small.
Keep in mind that even in free verse we should hold values to some conventions. Punctuation is quite important in free verse in my opinion.
you wrote
To the martin,
Its swoops in the sky,
Are perfect art.
I suggest
To the martin
who swoops in the sky
displays it's perfect art.
I suggest changing some wording here as I stumbled in the read. These are just a couple of suggestions to enhance a wonderful voice to the reader.
Over All Thoughts