This is one of the most inspiring writings I have read, in this genre, and oh, it is so true. When the things of this realm beckon to us and compete for our attention, we weaklings have a tendancy to give in. Our struggles are what constitute our life in this world, and you have put it very eloquently.
Frustration and dissatisfaction
plague my fading life.
I want to know so much more,
to do something with my life...
Our conscience is supposed to carry us through, but use of conscience is a subject that has been removed from the Curriculum of living. We are taught to be competitive in the secular world, and that entails listenening to 'without' rather than to 'within'. Write on. More such writing will cause the layers of misconception to fall off one by one, inshaa Allah (God Willing), in every one of us. Then we will understand what is expected of us. Amen.
I am glad, and thakful to God for your blessing. Blessed, you are indeed. Many children I have heard of, have not had an experience as fortunate as you have. This woman, may God rest her soul in eternal peace, was apparently, a God-minded soul. I am a single mother myself, with some issues of my own, and Oh, God! I pray that God help keep me alive until he is old enough to take care of himself. I do not have relatives, or other family members I can trust him to their care. I fear that if anything should happen to me, he too, could fall through the cracks of a system that does not investigate Foster Parents thouroughly, prior to trusting them with helpless lives. I have heard some true horror stories. Not all those who foster children do it for goodness sake. Many do it for the financial rewards, and other drives only God knows them.
I am happy for you, and commend your style in writing this beautiful piece of biography.
These are great tips, very much appreciated by the novice writer like myself. I know I have a book inside me just waiting to get out, and with tips such as these I am getting closer and closer to unleach the writer in me.
Thanks a million, and write on, please.
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