it's a great poem..i can easily relate to the longing for the love we once have but it isn't meant to be. I went through a same phase myself..the footprints of our loved ones always remain on our heart. The tone is beautiful. Lovely. Keep writing!
sheesh, this is comical..but i thought young girls nowadays idolise miley cyrus or taylor swift. Anyway, we all know that the price of celebrity somewhat amounts to strings of broken relations and rehab centres..even though girls nowadays are obsessed with looking and acting like them.
this has to be the best peice of poetry i've ever read...it fills the reader with etheral hope and inspiration. The miracles that the lord does may not be easily understood by us, but by my own experience i know that He does"catch us before we fall." mesmerizing.
a beautiful poem..inspiring and honest, it is a true example of how not giving up can make the toughest dream come true, no matter what the odds. The lines" he'll feel supreme, now he has reached the top,it's all worth it" is in true sense the glory of victory we feel at a job well done. Wish you luck with your writing.
bon jovi being my most favourite group ofall times..and lost highway being one of my favourite albums, i obviously found this peice of poetry strangly connecting to me
realistic but tender. I specially like the portion when you talk about the "unknown soul"thinking about you..somewhat akin to what i myself feel on recieving a gift,a smile..something which makes me feel i'm not alone in the world. P.S. Please review my poem too. The tamed tides by lilyaudrey
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please...i love joe, and he'll be perfect for the story.
