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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Very good piece of work. I enjoyed the imagery that was presented. If I had to say a negative I personally feel that a childhood segment was missing, that could have have bridged a gap between the baby becoming a man. And helped explain why the father was afraid. People don't change overnight after all. Other than that it was good read and would love to read more.
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