Before I begin I should let you know that I know nothing about poetry too, I just write what I want and how I feel, regardless of haiku's, etc. I liked your poem, your story. Took me to another place for a while, but I must say it left me a little dazed, I didnt quite grasp it all. Some parts felt as if words were just thrown together, I can't find the meaning behind it. But like I said in the beginning, I don't know much, and maybe I just didn't understand it the right way. But still, I liked it, a lot. Thanks for sharing!!
I'm not the greatest reviewer, but I would like to commend you on this one. I found it very fascinating, and the flow works good. For some reason it hits a nail with me, probably because I have been my own undoing, and I'm not sure if I understand it right, but I got the impression that the alchemist caused his own downfall, and now he suffers. But I guess that's the beauty of poetry, everyone has their own impression. I liked it, a lot. Thanks :)
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