Hello,
It indeed givesme great pleasure in reviewing your work and this is mainly because you have adroitly given the reader or presented to the audience a clear picture of night. I have never seen a work like this before. I must say, this poem was amazing.
Yours,
Vaishnav
Woww!!!
This story is just amazing. It portrays exactly the life of one who hates life. It is extremely interesting, engaging, enigmatic and intriguing. I found myself astounded, appalled and swayed when I viewed this amazing piece of work. You have adroitly portrayed the characteristics of this generation. Do avoid using words like 'gay'. I must say, I loved your work. Keep Writing!
Regards,
Vaishnav
Very interesting!!! Amazing story but can improve on the continuity and the style of your writing to grab the reader's attention. It's a long road ahead in writing and I wish you good luck!
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