Creepy tale and not one for the faint of heart. If you are a little bit squeamish, you might not want to read... or at least use the bathroom before you do. Jezri does for toilets what Hitchcock did for showers.
A disturbing but very real image of an alcoholic trying to drink her troubles away. Just as in real life, her attempts meet failure and lead to a life devoid of joy. Rhyme scheme works well. I wouldn't change a thing.
Clear, concise and a little erotic. The rhyme scheme works well creating the image of two lovers that are at their best in each others arms.The passion builds within the poem with descriptive words like flaming fire and burning sea. I wouldn't change a thing.
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