Great way to explain the rough basics of the penny's history
I stumbled a bit on the first line of the second paragraph. still not sure how it should flow.
I'm no expert and so its just a humble review.
interesting enough poll
must be hard to choose only 6 (as None, All and Other needs to be there)
I might disagree on choices of those six :P but thats a personal thing for me.
sweet and sad.
I like your descriptive interaction. Very well written and makes a vivid notion of touch.
I can't judge beyond an average reader, though.
But noting jumped out at me as other then good work
This was one of the first stories i read in here, that thoroughly made me feel inadequate.
It is so well laid out. making one wish, and not wish to understand them.
Personally i felt the repeating of one sentence was a bit off, but i would give that over to the fact that it's a spoken repetition.
"a name would be mentioned, and the men would stop and take a drink, and sit in dead silence until they could speak again without their voices cracking"
"Someone would say a name and they would become silent, take a drink, and continue once they could without their voices cracking."
And in case you were still wondering. great work! :P
cant wait to see you battle that monster of yours.
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