So good and too true, I'm the same, lol. I Loved how I'm reading along thinking you're talking about a lover and I'm thinking 'oh thats just how I feel, how cool!' Then it's about that (especially the first one in the morning) darned coffee, I re-read it, still how I feel about my glorious hot sweet first love, that my father kindly introduced me to at age 5. yeah, no sleep! but if I go without, i get headaches, grrrreat :/ lol
Very good, I wish i could write a short verse, it's like a little punch, I found it quite funny. I was expecting a big long poem, You've actually taught me something, poetry can be small and still in your face :D I love it
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