This was a beautiful piece to read. I actually found myself lying on a blanket in the grass imagining my guy holding me, healing all the old hurts. I thought about the difficult times I've experienced.
Suggestions I have:
If for poetry, try to write more in a poetic style. This was like a letter to me.
Thanks for the great read though and I hope to see more from you.
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