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Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
What a horrifying idea. The Romeo Juliet of the modern-day. I think that it has some build to it not knowing all the details. More and more intensity as it goes on. I think that the structure is great.

You were able to grab the attention of the reader. You can work on building the charters more than what was here. It is short but even in that small time, there is room to build with the charters too.

great short story.
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