Wow! First, I love how you formatted this post. It really added a unique flair to the poem. My heart aches for the one-sided love. I read the footnote, and maybe how I interpreted it;is that they were married. My God that makes the pain even worse. It is one thing if it is a crush or a short fling. But for it to be your wife, that is so intense.
I enjoyed this poem and the footnote just made it even more reaching for the reader.
I reread this a couple of times. Wow, this is deep. I can relate to this. I could have avoided this situation if I had just kept to my 'aloneness.' great work!
You painted the turmoil vividly and intensely. I was hooked and locked in. Feeling her anguish and fear. You did a lovely job with this touchy subject.
Wow! I love this. It's very inspirational, real, and positive. I'm struggling and surrounded by negative people, and this just made me feel as though I was given a hug and advice. Thank You for this, and keep being you! You're awesome!
I really loved your story, it brought tears to my eyes.
Not just because I am going through the same process as your main character, but the words your choose and how you put this together. I really enjoyed it and it is very therapeutic.
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