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Review by CJ FENTON Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
HELLO, Well Mitch lets see here. This piece is nice. The words seem to portray your message.
The theme is kinda hard to follow. If I'M getting this right is has to do with what if could have been, in the past. Maybe work on the flow and the rythim a bit. Add some more rhymes.
All and all, not bad.
CJF.. CHECK OUT MY PORTFOLIO THNX.
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Review by CJ FENTON Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
Hey immortal, not bad. Your words where deep and meaningful. You might try to shorten the lines. Maybe try to break them up and create more stanzas. Nice descriptive wording they convey your message well. All and All it was a good start to your first sonnet.
Check out my portfolio and rate the three I have done so far. Thanks, keep going.
CJF
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Yes, Hello Princess Megan. Your account of Audrey Hepburn is pretty good. You definatley did your homework. I did not know she was born in Belguim or that she was a from the line of King Edward the third. I agree she was a great actress and very beautiful. Her work with Unicef sounded very commendable. Thank you for your insight and knowledge report of her. You did a good job in writing this and also by keeping her spirit alive.
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