I like the word usage in this story, it's really good and creates a good atmosphere for the reader. I like how it tells the story of two completely opposite people that were or could be in love, but it tells it in a new way that makes it not like the many cliches. Great work!
This story is great. It's emotional on a high level, having it touch deep within you. The imagery is perfect, and the word choice provides a great idea of what is going and and creates emotion in the reader. And I like how you don't tell the narrators name, allowing the audience to connect with the narrator on a personal level. Honestly, this is one of the best stories I've ever read.
This story is the one that I've been looking for. It's perfect in every way, from the message it gives to the incredibly detailed description it gives. I shows that people can easily misinform the rest of us to making us believe that even though we are being shown the truth, we think it is a hoax. Pretty clever of the author to think that. I love this story.
Wow, that was good. It did feel a bit short, but it was still pretty good. The way the story was made was great, it made it was a poem, as I just realize. It was made well, with good imagery and story details. However, the beginning was a bit confusing, as it kind of just threw you into it with no warning whatsoever. This pretty good, though.
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