Beautiful articulation of words. Your description of your experience leaves the reader with goose bumps at the horror of the story. One is left yearning to know what happens at the end. Your story is emotionally engaging and keeps the reader on their feet.
My honest review of this journal is that one can easily understand what the story is about, but one may easily get distracted from reading. This is because of punctuation mistakes .For example the beginning of a sentence always starts with a capital letter also, in the English language ,the letter 'i' in a sentence is always written in capital for example 'My teammates and I'. Reading more English texts will help improve your writing.
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