Wow that was awesome. It reminds me of a poem I wrote called Death's Demand. Actually, the poem was supposed to be depressing but turned out inspiring. Creepy. But I really liked it. You are a gifted writer. Only a few people can put emotion into poems. It almost hurt to read it. It really grips a reader.
I used to write a lot of poems like that, during a particulary bad part of my short life. I am only a high schooler. But you'll pull through, trust me, especially when surrounded by friends that care about you. I really liked it! Wish I could be that good!
~Faye Lee~
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