I am fast becoming a fan of your work. The character, Norton, is just so full of life...you bring him to life just as you do in Remote Control.
I could feel the breeze when Norton was on his walk..I could see the devastation of the crash, and i was right there with him in the hospital.
My thoughts are that maybe some of the paragraphs are a little long and would benefit from a split here and there.
I really liked this story. I loved the believability of the narrator, and I was more impressed when I suddenly realised that the narrator was in fact a dog.
I know I should try and balance this review with negative observations but I think it would be a bit pedantic of me to include something that isn't there. I liked it a lot.
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