Clearwater's (margaretfew) Reviews

Clearwater

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15 Public Reviews Given

68 Total Reviews Given

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#1910333

Review of Winter Solitude

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Rated: E

| (3.5)

give me more...please. I want to know what you see. The transition between the beauty of the frozen tundra and its fading is a little abrupt. Give me more.

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#1910331

Review of Belize! Belize!

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Rated: E

| (3.5)

I want to know more. Interesting plot.

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#1910325

Review of The Old Captain

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Rated: E

| (4.0)

Reminds me of the book "Ahab's Wife."

Interesting. I can feel the waves and the dread and the fear - and the absolution.

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#1909398

Review of You may not love me anymore

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Rated: 13+

| (4.5)

Very good...struck a cord...I understand the feelings.

It's ok.

Meg

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#1906794

Review of for meg

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

Thank you.

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#1906793

Review of Hi Dad...

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Rated: E

| (3.5)

Interesting...sad...profound...Gave it a 3.5 because I think in the morning when you are fresh you can make it a little more cohesive.

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#1905971

Review of Writes on Black Walls

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Rated: 18+

| (4.0)

Thought-provoking. Powerful messages within your words.

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#1901149

Review of Small

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Rated: E

| (4.0)

very interesting...I like your choice of words...your phrases.

Your inner "madness" appeals to me as I am small also.

But big as life on the outside.

Meg

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#1901078

Review of The Difference

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Rated: 13+

| (4.5)

Mom always said, "Honey, there's a fine line between love and hate."

Your poem is good...very good... .

Meg

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#1890895

Review of My painful love

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Rated: E

| (3.5)

I like this one even better. Work on how to cut out some of your words so your "sentences" are about the same length.

Close your eyes, and go with the flow...you're getting there.

Meg

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#1890891

Review of Your Happiness, My Pain!

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Rated: E

| (3.0)

My heart floating off in the day...

very good!