let me by starting off by saying this is great, I saw a image of a grey cat in my mind growing gray. this might be confusing for some other readers. I am not sure where you are going with this or saying. or maybe that is your point of the verse. good work though with the starting sentence.
This is very deep and by that I mean this makes you think about he struggles of family life. I love how you choose to space out your paragraphs it was very well done. I love how this is written so I can see a movie inside my head of what is happening but I don' get the whole movie till the end.
I Really like how you start the written work with different words and emotion it really catches the readers attention with the powerful words you used. this is a very sad written piece of work. it shows that in some community of love like religion there could also be hate in that group it's a very sad world we live in. I believe you're point is hate should not exist no matter what. excellent work!
This is is very good, I love written work that truly makes people think, and this for sure makes me think. I am not 54. but i think at every point in every age category . We go through thoughts like these. I like how you started this written work with a question it really brings in the reader. Great job.
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