"Everything that glitters isn't gold"
I like that. I could really relate to this, as not too long ago I was in a toxic, unhealthy friendship that I had to end. Keep writing!
I liked this poem. It's quite simple, easy to read, and has a really important message behind it. A tip I have is to add a question mark after the question "Who knows where I'd be" instead of a period but other than that I thought this was excellent!
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