You write with a poetic mind. I could visualize your frosty lane and it brightened my day. Your poem conveys "Joie de vivre" . I love the line ...an angels little laugh
innocence is catching
it's light it's pure it's true
Lucy, it is nice to see you break out and post your poetry. Often the best prose comes from those of us who are depressed, disconsolate and forlorn. Congratulations for clicking "submit" and putting yourself out there. I am a new poet on this site and have appreciated people reviewing my work so, in turn I return the favor. Your poem is heartfelt and and that is what counts to me. Keep writing.
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