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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Hello Cynicalthought,
Your poem is one of the most heartfelt work I have ever read and it really touched my heart. Every phrase, I could feel the depression, the misery the sorrow you wanted to express through words. I once felt like this and your choice of words are great. I also could not find any errors. Over all, a very nice and touching poem!

Have a nice day to you and God bless to you!
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Review of Gray Skies.  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Poeta!!

Your poem is so great!
You created a very good picture of darkness and sadness and I felt it so myself! Your choice of words are wonderful and the rhythm is also great! I also can relate to the message of your work 'coz when I feel miserable, that's exactly how I feel and you really got it! I could find no errors so I have no suggestions.

Have a nice day to you!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Insomnia  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello!

I'll say I love your poem!
But maybe 'flesh' would be a better word than 'meat?' (2nd stanza)Because when I read the word, It made me think of it like it's something to eat.
Oh dear but don't get me wrong, I so adore your work *Heart*
In all,, the words are great, I am looking forward in seeing your other works.

Spasiba, and God bless!
Merry Christmas to you and a Fruitful year ahead!
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