I'm not going to sugar-coat it because I'm sure everyone else will tell you how nice and sweet you piece is. To be honest I'm not really sure if this needed to be a poem. It is so deeply personal and very specific, it seems like turning it into a poem would've taken quite a bit of effort, and i'm not sure it was worth it. It's very long and the ryhthm is... well.. weird. Don't get me wrong I'm all for the benefits of theraputic writing, but I think you need to make a distinction between what is for you and what is for show.
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