This sounds like such an adorably sweet song ^_^ and such a nice contrast of those who ravenously consume what comes with love as they are merely fueled by desire, to those who take their time and embrace the benefits of love slowly and with tender care. Although, one bit I wonder about is how you ask "if" in the second paragraph as if they already consumed it, and the third paragraph you said "could" so I am not sure where in time this is taking place. All in all, this is a delightful piece ^_^
And then it continues now, shamefully common tragedy. It almost seems as if people are becoming more proudly stupid and privileged everyday. The presentation of this piece is very artfully done, almost seems like a rap script that could be portrayed with force, and read equally so. Well done.
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