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Rated: E | (3.0)
Hi Shanx, your poem is good. The only thing that you may want to do is add a little bit more imagery. For instance, when you talk about the leaves turning colors, you could have described more about the colors of them. All in all a good poem. I could see the imagery you have described.
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