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Review by KinzeyKay Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I really loved this mad lib! I thought it was so funny. I really love random things that don't make sense so of course this was perfect. Your story was pretty good but of course theres always room to add on to make the story more descriptive. Maybe you could add some lines about the monster, in my case, being the superhero's daughter, i think that will just add on to the humor of your piece :) good job and keep up the funny work!
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Wow I was really impressed with this. It makes me want to read more! I especially loved how descriptive it was. "The gentle breeze, fresh and tasty". It made feel like I was there, sitting on the bench watching it all take place. You are truely talented and should definately keep writing! Very good job!
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Review of Shut up!  Open in new Window.
Review by KinzeyKay Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
i really liked this, it made a good point. ;)
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