This poem is practically understandable and accurate as to the subject matter right now. People can be selfish, self-centered, and cruel, but they can also redeem themselves of this when things get really devastating for others.
I sincerely hope our selfishness would not be our undoing in the future.
This poem truly is a work of art that you made here. The reasons for this praise are as follows:
The subject of the poem is all too true in some places. After all, there are people in the world that have been so clouded in their judgement from the luxuries of their wealth. Their loved ones abandon them when they couldn't take it anymore. And the moment these people find out what has happened in their life, it's already too late for them. They are on their own, without anyone to help them.
The main character of this poem happens to be one of those people, as he laments on his life, choices, and regrets. He knows that he couldn't take it all back, because it is already too late for him. His friends, family, acquaintances, and loved ones have all left him to die alone. There is nothing he could do but accept his fate.
Not bad. Not bat all. A work from your first book of poetry shows me how you wrote your works when you began.
The first verse of the poem had four lines while the rest had three talks about the style you used here. The subject is deep in this since it's all too true. Everybody in this world has only one life, and must do what they can to enjoy every remaining second of it before moving on.
Nice story you got here. The medieval-like feel of the setting is pretty impressive, and the dangers the lead characters have to face feel a bit realistic to some degree. The atmosphere sure does look like a mix of Pokemon with an Arthurian tale. Then again, that's the idea here.
Keep up the good work.
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