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Review by Murc
Rated: E | (4.0)
This reminds me of the warning messages I get on World of Warcraft. I have had many, many problems in the past with virus's, account theft, and stuff like that. Now I am more careful. I only visit sites that I know I can trust.

This article would be very insightful to a person that has little experience with computers, and it is good for parents, anybody really. But it looks very professional. I have a hard time imagining that you wouldn't be making warning messages for a living.
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Review of Veggies  
Review by Murc
Rated: E | (5.0)
That is pretty funny. It reminded me of a Monty Python skit. I could see my old drama teacher trying to get us to act out something like this. The customer reminded me of an old neighbor I had a few years ago. Very, very picky. And the reactions of the waiter and the manager.
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Review of A VIEW ON REVIEWS  
Review by Murc
Rated: E | (4.5)
"Tihs is grate! Keep up teh goood werk!@!!"

I'm just kidding. I just thought I would put that there to at least attempt to be funny. I completely agree with what you are saying here. I mean, one of the main reasons I even decided to join this site is to get reviews... good or bad... they are all building blocks to help be better. So far, I have been doing just as you said, I have been responding to everyones reviews. I mean, at least they are taking the time to read my entries. I am happy for that.

Aside from how this makes me feel however, I should point out some things that I especially liked about this entry. 1) I learned in journalism, that one things a person can do to make something more attractive for the reader is to make good use of what white space you have. Also, I liked how you have some words in bold, some in italics, some in regular font, some big some little. There's really a lot of diversity here for a piece that is only around 700 words. I liked it.
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