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Rated: E | (5.0)
Great story. The vernacular made for a fun read. Thank you for sharing this.
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Review of Giving Up  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
This seems raw and real. Powerful piece. Rest assured, all is not lost.
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Rated: E | (2.5)
There's a backstory here, but it's muddled by typos and grammatical issues. I'm no grammar Nazi, but the fundamentals need to be there. A ten minute rewrite would fix it.
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Review of What I hath lost.  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
Great story! I enjoyed the way you used letters as the delivery vessel. It works very well. It's always an added bonus to make a pompous ass see the err of their ways.
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Review of Muses and Writing  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.0)
The human spirit and will, at all ages, inspires me the most. Believe in the impossible and reach for that which few dare to attain.
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Review of The Big Promotion  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.0)
A fun read. Careful with your commas. Lipstick was good, too. Good luck out there.
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Review of Romantic Love  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.0)
I liked this poem. Your imagery was elegant. Couple of things I noticed:

Then vs. than. We're you in love more in the past (then), or in a comparative sense (than)?

The last line feels like it should be in the past tense. "I loved, but lost."

Good work overall.
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