An Interesting piece, a good breather from the amount of copied storylines found today. As the beginning of the story gives enough information for an author to add to, but not so much as to limit what they can write about. They can either spring the main character into the action straight away, or ease them in trying to build a sense of foreboding.
As for improvements, perhaps the setting could be made an option; some authors prefer city landscapes, where others like to write about the countryside. Also the possibility of POV changes, such as finding out what another survivor of the original zombie attack is doing, because not all want to write of a male character.
Other than those small nit-pickings I would believe this is a good story with plenty of potential
Amazing, is the first word that comes to mind now that I’ve read a larger portion of the main storyline. Although the idea is not original, the way it has been set out is. I don’t think anybody yet has given such thought into a singular story. I mean this as so far I have not heard of a story where the author will take time and send a map (Highly detailed I might add) to the reader, plus the amount of thought gone into the character is amazing.
Generally I believe this might become one of the lasting stories that may continue for years possible, all it needs is publicity add regular additions. At the moment I can’t think of any improvements. Keep up the good work, I will certainly be adding to it when I have a chance. Well done. 5/5
Keep writing,
shadow
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