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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello!

I just read your poem “Wrong again, but failing to fall” and really liked it.🤭I loved how it mixes deep ideas with interesting images. The part about travelers felt like this big journey, and then it shifts to something bigger about the world and people, which was really cool.

The line “The harmony senses a cold, clamoring truth” stuck with me. It felt really powerful and honest. And the ending with “radically owned ideas / Of a flying stratosphere” was super creative and kind of dreamy.

Overall, your poem is unique and made me think. Thanks for sharing it!

With regards,
Mercy
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