Brilliant poem. I love the way you write. In so little you express so much, and leave our imagination and memories to fill the blank spaces with our own happiness. I think this poem is really successful because everyone has their stash of happy nighttime memories, and by not filling every detail, you have given every reader their own space to modify their vision of it. I think Lunar Picnic is: Short, Sweet, and Clean-cut.
-Midnight_Poet.
P.S. Check out my poem "Black Moon"
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