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Review of Autumn  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Very nice, I enjoyed the visual it gave me as I was reading. I'm more of a rhymer, but have busted out a few non-rhymers in my lifetime. I enjoyed this one very much. Thank you for sharing your work with us here, and I will be sure to read more that I may come across of yours. Keep writing and I'll keep reading!


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Review of Grief Displaced  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Beautiful, and meaningful. I liked it very much, the sadness comes through with your words just as I expected it would. That was a terrible day, that lives on forever. So much death and sadness, such terrible losses. I remember how my heart felt that day, even though I was hundreds of miles away, it's not a feeling I can forget. Thank you for sharing your words with us. Keep writing and I will keep reading.


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Review of Saving Maximus  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This one hits home very much. I loved it, and glad for a happy ending. I'm not sure if it's fiction or not, but we actually went thru the same thing a few years ago with a puppy we had. Unfortunately, he wasn't able to become a big dog, he left us after a year and 4 months. But we shared so much love with that little guy in the year, that he will always live in our hearts.

Thank you very much for the story, I loved it, and it made me smile and remember our lil guy.


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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Great story/poem. I enjoyed it, and could picture it, but I couldn't smell it because I don't know how patchouli smells. :) It's a great memory it seems that you have, of times long passed. I didn't see anything grammatically incorrect anywhere. I don't always review for mistakes, but if they are there, I will let you know. Thank you for sharing your piece with us, keep writing, and we'll keep reading.


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Review of Tears Unseen  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi there. A very emotional piece, and I liked it very much. It was dark and truthful And I can definitely relate to it, especially about the world and killing and hurting. But we all go on, and deal with it daily, but it's nice to see someone write about it. I'm not real good at freestyle, I'm more of a rhymer, but I did enjoy this piece a lot. No grammatical errors or spelling errors that I saw. Thank you for sharing, keep writing, and we'll keep reading.


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Review of Stay  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Very touching story. I loved the use of repetition, by the way. I enjoyed it, though I don't read many romance poems, but I made the exception to this one. I can feel you sadness and see things thru your eyes, that's what most writers want. We write for ourselves, and when the reader can see it through our eyes, it's a hit. Thank you for sharing this story/piece with us. I look forward to more.


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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Great cliff hanger. Interesting story, especially since it has to do with parallel universes. It's funny, because a co-worker and I were just talking about that the other day. NO grammatical errors or spelling errors that I saw. All in all a great story, kept me reading so I could see what happened. The characters dialogue was great too. Thank you for your story, keep writing and I'll keep reading.


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Review of Silent Witness  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I love the line, 'in crimson wreaths, she rests in final sleep' just love it. Great piece, vivid, and real. I enjoyed this tremendously! Thank you for this awesome piece of work, we're so lucky here to have such talent among us. Good luck with the contest, I'm still feeling like I may reconsider joining...lol


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Review of light  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Happy Anniversary! I liked this Haiku, they are one of my favorite types of poetry. I love the visual you gave us with this one. Maybe you'll write some more in the future. Thank you again!


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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Very good. I think you need to expand some on it, great cliff hanger though. And just a quick note, the quotes that you are using should be " instead of ' double quotes not single. Just wanted to let you know. I do not normally read this genre, on the rare occasion though, I decided to and enjoyed it. Thank you for your creation, very good story, with good action scenes. Didn't like the dog dying, but oh well....lol Have a great holiday!


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Rated: E | (4.0)
Interesting story, not what I expected, as is often the case when I read all the wonderful work that is here at WDC. I enjoyed the way you set it up with just a few words. I'm curious to the back story too, I think this could be a neat little novella. I don't normally point out grammatical errors, but when I come across them I like to let writers know:

shining--I think this was supposed to be 'shiny'

patience--I think you meant 'patients'

even as though some entity was beckoning to him from above--I believe you can delete 'even' from this, as it implies more than what is written.

stripped--supposed to be 'striped'

Thank you for this great little story, happy holidays!


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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Wonderful story! Heart-warming and fun to read all at the same time. The setting was great, I could picture it in my minds eye, and even heard Grandma's voice as she scolded the children, and now I want cookies. Thank you for your creation, an excellent read, fun and well-written! Happy Holidays!


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Review of "UNGH!"  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hey, can I get some of that? I have some 'friends' I'd like to try it out on...lol Cute story, not what I was expecting, but a lot of the pieces on WDC surprise me. Christmas is a time for strange things to happen, some wonderful, some not so much. This is definitely one of my top strange stories I've read and that is certainly a good thing. Thank you for creating this piece and bringing a smile to my lips. Happy Holidays!


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Review of White Balloons  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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Very touching piece, sadness all around, felt like I was watching it as you were. I clicked on it for the title and definition, thank you for sharing this wonderful piece with us. I'm sure it's rec'd many a review, and I"m adding mine to the list. Thank you again, would love to read more of your work, and I'm sure I will.


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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Loved it! The innocence in a child's eye is probably one of the most purest things on this earth. I enjoyed the flow of your piece, and found myself rereading just because I enjoyed it so much.

'Endless rings of color on the surface of a sphere.
Their smiles radiate the joy of an innocent heart.'

That must be one of my favorite lines. The whole piece was so vivid, I felt that I was there as well, watching from the vehicle. Thank you for sharing your wonderful words and talent with us all.


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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Not what I expected by the title, I'll say that now. Otherwise, wonderful piece. Though sad, it touches on the reality that people have had to face in this world we live in. Underlying truths, and feelings I'm sure we would all be able to relate to. I did enjoy the rhyming scheme, which I normally do. A true, heartfelt message that should be heard in our world today. Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest, I think you have a good chance at winning something...(must make my poem way better...LOL)


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Review of Dark Scribe  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Excellent! I"m a sucker for rhymes, no matter what rhyme scheme is followed. This was definitely dark, but so true for some I can't even imagine the pain they go through. It reminds me of some of my darker prose, and my savior for all of the bad things that happen is always my pen. My pen and paper give me strength just as your poem does someone else. I wish that others would feel that way too. Thank you for sharing your talent with us for so many years. And wish you many more to come!


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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
All done. Okay, I do not normally make corrections on the reviews, but if you enter into the contest, they like the edited version. So below, after I praise you momentarily for your idea, there are some corrections that should be made. :) But now, time for praise...Excellent story, I truly think this piece has the potential to win the contest, it was well written, besides the couple of errors I mentioned. It had me hooked, and I LOVE LOVE LOVED the ending! I started laughing at the end when he found out about the lovely Sandy.

But unfortunately, like all others before it, the bloody steak just wasn’t enough to satiate dear Harris. I think this should just be sate

would have existed in a million years should be 'could'

The part where Sandy and he meet and she prepares 'special' food for him, the paragraph should be split up. I believe this should be a separate paragraph, not attached to the other paragraph.

Harris made his was way

as they melt in his mouth. delete these two words, it sounds better without them

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Review of The Premonition  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Wow! Nice twist, I thought maybe he would have an accident and lose both parts, but nope, you surprised me. Not sure about poor Joe's state of mind though, to jam his foot in the mower blade just because he could. Dark indeed, but I loved it...I even snickered at Joe at the end. Great setting, the pull was there from the beginning, and kept me reading. Thanks for sharing your morbid sense of writing! :)


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Review of The Monster  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
What can I say? Wow, Janet must be having an off day. I'm not sure where you want to go with this piece, but it seems to me it could be a prologue of a longer story, or a flash fiction piece if you choose. Or you could certainly turn it into a much longer piece if that's your wish. It definitely has potential to go many different ways. It reminds me of some of my pieces that are what they are, but have many choices on which way they could go. Good luck with whatever you choose, and I look forward to reading more if you turn it into something. Keep playing with those ideas!


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Review of Unknown  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)


No truer words were ever spoken. Parents are a pain, but they are supposed to be. Other than the spacing of paragraphs, the only error I noticed was in this sentence: 'I would last without the wisdom and curiosity.' Should be 'wouldn't' last I believe is what you meant to say. If you use this same thought process, you could probably write a poem about it, with the same meaning. Just an idea. Good luck with the parents, and keep writing and sharing your thoughts with us.


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Review of The Sound  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello there. That poor guy just had some bad luck didn't he? Maybe he should contact bad luck anonymous instead. Great story, it had me hooked from the start. I was rooting for him, but unfortunately, Mrs. Taylor wasn't. It was comedic, but sad as well. Thank you for sharing your writing voice, I look forward to more laughs and your stories.

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Poor poor humpty....Always liked him, but he was prone to mistakes, sometimes his motives scrambled my mind...lol Sorry, bad joke. Great story though, certainly made me think something completely different, but I did love the way you put it together. Great job, thank you for the smile.

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Review of Number One Guy  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
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Love it no doubt...found one spelling error, but didn't care...it was great. I love the comedy of it all, I could so picture Santa sitting down and writing that letter to his son. Thank you for making me smile, especially today, it was a rough one...Have a great weekend!


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Review of Thick as Thieves  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I certainly did enjoy it. It painted the picture I expected by it's introduction. There is only one thing I would consider changing, it's in the the line:

'a price set on our stole souls.' I think maybe you could change it to 'thieving souls', and it would flow better? Not sure, but it's an opinion I wanted to share with you. Great job and I look forward to reading more. Thank you for sharing.


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