C M Allen's (midorii88) Reviews

C M Allen

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#2704666

Review of The Brush of Death's Lips

Review by C M Allen

Rated: 18+

| (5.0)

This is a great exerpt!! The story line so far is great. Your details are good and I was able to picture the scene easily. You have some ideas here that I have not read before in fantasy such as the "gates" from which the characters are seemingly drawing power from. You are weaving a intricate and intriguing story here.

Cheers!

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#2704304

Review of The Skunk and The Porcupine

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

Ha ha! This is so cute, I love it!

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#2703407

Review of I Just LOVE...

Review by C M Allen

Rated: E

| (5.0)

I love the flow of this and it is so catchy and quirky.
Very nice poetry my friend!

Cheers!!
Rissa

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#2703382

Review of she chose

Review by C M Allen

Rated: E

| (4.5)

Ida,

This is a well done poem. It moved me greatly. I am not much of a poetry person so I cannot dissect it and give much criticism from a technical standpoint, but I can tell you that I can feel the emotions behind the words and picture a scenario in my mind. I am an only child of a divorced family and although my parents stayed friends and worked together, it still had its hard times. Now that I am a mother, I have a better understanding of what it must be like from a parents perspective and I feel this poem really sheds light on those feelings of loss, heartbreak and guilt.
I really like the 6th and the last stanzas where you talk about her being grown up and understanding because I know that is so true. It just hits home for me.

Thank you for sharing this!

Cheers!
Rissa

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#2703345

Review of There's A Spider On My Foot

Review by C M Allen

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Ha! This is catchy and quirky. I do feel horribly sad for the spider though (sniff).

R.I.P. Mr. Spider,
Rissa

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#2703340

Review of Where Snowflakes Came From

Review by C M Allen

Rated: E

| (4.5)

This is so creative and brings a warm smile to my heart.
It really makes sense in the way that butterflies seem to float more than fly, just like snowflakes.

Very enjoyable!
Rissa

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#2703275

Review of Sinister Fruit

Review by C M Allen

Rated: ASR

| (4.0)

Very strange indeed! You have great detail in this piece and I really love the very first paragraph. I did find the details got to be a little much as I read further and found myself skipping over sentences here and there looking for something significant to happen. The ending was definately a surprise and made me laugh a bit.
Overall I really enjoyed it!

Cheers,
Rissa