i laughed in the start when i saw the title and read the first few lines. but in the end of the story i just wanted to give main character a pat on tjhe shoulder and say "well done"
i think the story is good and original (i dont know if its a factionel sotory so i just review it as a fictional one)
i also like the style of the story and its a nice story with a development from the main character being a fool to actually be able to do something good in the end. and as i said before, as a reader you just want to give him a pat on the shoulder and say "well done"
i like the fact that this poem is written over something as simple as the english word. i thought it was funny and it actually makes you think about the english word and how it can be used in other ways than i would useually use them.
its also good that you actually used some "dificult" words or special if you'd like
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