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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hahaha. Niiice!!! Karma is a bitch!

Good set up. Beginning, middle and an end all worked together in this super short story. Usually bully stories are told from the victim but not this one. I liked switch.

Now. My criticism. "my merciless teasing drove them off." Who's them? I thought the main character was teasing exclusively Clarence? Was he also teasing the other kids too? It was unclear. That's my only criticism about it? Other than that it was very good. A unique idea.

Thanx for sharing. *Wink*
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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