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Rated: E | (4.5)
Wow! I just happened to read your revision so much later in the same day. Now that's some transformation, attitude, and funny!
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Beautiful idea, starts out nicely. I don't get all the emotions: disdain, resentment, shutting down.

I like the whole rollling down and gravity idea. If trapped emotions are freed, there must be more goodness released then just those lingering negative emotions. I like to have a couple of drinks and watch a really good movie and have a good cry. Just my personal preference, though, the idea to explore emotional release without complicating emotions, don't mean to impose my meaning on yours.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Well done. I like how it develops from the broad, natural setting down to a teardrop and resolution to the problem of John shutting himself off from the world, against her advice.

I like out of the corner of his eye, for some reason don't like the imaginary hand.

I like how his words break the serene silence.

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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
I like the images and sounds. I was reading some Gary Snyder this morning, your poem is aural by comparison to his being more visual.

I'm an aural person, so I find this peaceful and inspiring.

Not sure about frigid tunes. I could hear the tundra howling, I like the image of roaming the counties at a rapid pace, like a wolf.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Had me totally going with the story, details - I didn't like the end. It seems like a funny story until then.

I like your story telling and idea. Waking up and dealing with (real) fog is a funny idea.
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