dawn's (mindfullness70) Reviews

I enjoyed it you really loved your dad my parents also passed on and I like that you brought up belief in Jesus Christ you chose to think of the good.

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#4259674

Review of Jessica Tiffany

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Rated: E

| (3.0)

its ok I try to respect your views I think what I would do if I had that problem or you could have stated your opinions with no ill feelings.

5

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#4259670

Review of She wanted him

Review by dawn

Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

I LIKED IT BUT I HAVE NEVER BEEN IN THAT SITUATION I CAN IMAGINE IT WOULD BE VERY HARD I CAN SAY MEN ARE CUTE BUT I LOVE MY FIANCEE VERY MUCH.

6

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#4259328

Review of Hare Trigger

Review by dawn

Rated: ASR

| (4.5)

I lost this before its very good I liked the part of the hare it could have been a rat or beetle
transula too I liked you had people running may write a longer part 2

7

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#4259011

Review of Have To Believe

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

I enjoyed the poem I think he wants a reason to get up. I LOVED IT I WRITE POETRY TOO I WOULD ENC OURAGE YOU TO CONTINUE

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#4259007

Review of The Rocking Horse Christmas

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

STORY IS GREAT,IT HAS HOLIDAY MEMORIES OF GRANDMA ROCKING HER GRAND CHILD TO SLEEP FAMILY PITCHING IN GRANPA OFF TO WAR

9

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#4258999

Review of Boys in Blue

Review by dawn

Rated: 18+

| (5.0)

It was good it reminded mr of an affair where he didn't tell his girlfriend he was married and one of them tried to kill each other. Harry I think is the policeman.

10

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#4258760

Review of The Fun House

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Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

The fun house seem very good the two people were scared by the transula.

11

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#4258550

Review of Locked away Love

Review by dawn

Rated: E

| (5.0)

I liked it very much I saw it as some situation that can and does happen even though it's wrong women use children as leverage against the other partner.