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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
I like the feeling of darkness and despair in this poem. Overall it got the message sent. If I may come with a suggestion to and yet another level to this poem, maybe some passage in the middle, something to add one more dimension in order to make the readers wonder if this is it or if it's just the beginning of the description of this dark place. But just nu personal thought, I really enjoyed reading this poem.
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