Brendalee, I enjoyed reading your piece and I thought that you did a fine job on it. My dearest beloved ... my first love. was written nicely and it made me think back to my first love and how I felt.Keep up the good work and I hope you will continue to write.
Good job and very true ,we don't thank him as we should and we all are blessed by him daily. God does bless those that believe in him. He has done so much for me and my family . And I am so thankful to have him in my life.For with out him I would be lost. I enjoyed reading this and it felt wonderful reading your words. Also I wanted to thank you for helping me to reflect on him today and all that he has done for me and my family. Please keep up the good work and may you be blessed for it, not only in this world but the next as well.
Claire G your poem titled " Legacy " was written well. I think that you did a very fine job on this piece. I really enjoyed reading it and I liked it very much. I like to read and write poetry myself. Anyway I hope that you will keep writing. Nice work .
Chenoa I enjoyed your poem titled " Pieces of You ". I liked it a lot and I enjoyed reading it. I thought that you did a good job on this piece. I liked how it was written out and I thought that it was written well. I too write poetry . Anyway good job. Keep it up .
Bakky your story " Homemade " was written well and I enjoyed reading it. I think that you did a very fine job on this piece. I normally do not read mysteries. But since join writing .com I have started doing so. And glad that I have started reading this type of genre. I hope that you continue to write and keep up the good work.
AliciaWithAy your poem " Guzelim " was written out very well. I enjoyed reading your poem and I liked it a lot. I think that you did a nice job on this piece.I enjoy reading poetry especially ones written about love. I write poetry but often find it hard to write on the subject of love and relationships. Y ou did a fine job. Keep it up.
Ann I think your poem " A Morning's Greeting " was short but as they say sweet. You did a nice job ont his piece.It was written nicely. You could feel the love in this poem as you read it. I think that you did a fine job . So keep up the good work. Nice job.
Green Dragon thanks for the information on traveling with pets. In the near future I am relocating to Arizona from Alabama with 14 cats. I could use any information on traveling by vechile. I am planning on renting an rv to ensure the safe journey . I have checked with different animal haulers and their prices are just a little bit less than me renting the rv, but the animal and I would not be traveling together nor at the same time. So for me renting the rv is the best solution.But any information that you might have please forward to me please . Thanks for doing a good job. Keep it up.
Dancing Star I enjoyed reading " Ordinary ". I thought that it would end differently and it was a nice surprise that it ended as it did. I think that you did a fine job on this piece. And that it was written well. I hope that you continue to do such good work.
Judie I like your story " My Son ". It reminds me of a poem that I wrote almost 15 years ago. It is posted on this site It's called " My Little Boy ". I enjoyed read yours. You can feel the love that you have for him. Good job on this piece. Keep up the good work.
Dreamland I enjoyed reading "Ashe, Ashes, All Fall Down".
I agree we need to do more. I wrote a poem 1997 called Mother Earth, I haven't post it yet but have started a rewrite and it's still in progress but is posted. I think that you did a very good job on this piece. Keep up the good work.
Gailey your column Titled " Dreams " was written out nicely. I liked it alot. I did however find one typo (lampshade) other than that everything was fine. It read well and that was due to it being written so well. I think that you did a good job on this piece. So keep up the good work.
Icarus, This was good. I enjoyed your story " UnDying Attempt ". You really did a good job on this piece it was written very well. I liked how you wrote your character "William Golden". My favorite line of the story was were you said," His body has become a prison, holding his soul captive". That was well said and most fitting for your story . Good Job.
Trigger, You did a good job on your story "Dogs And Canes". The story was written well. I really liked the plot. Your dialogue between the characters was done right And it all came together nicely. This piece is good and you should be proud. Keep up the good work.
Gapgurl I really think that you did a fine job on this piece. I am sure that it could be edited somewhere but I couldn't fine where I would do so. You should be proud you worked hard on this piece and it shows. It was well written and your story was good. Keep it up. Good Job.
Miblu back asap I really liked " Lost Prays ". You really did a wonderful job on this piece. You wrote this piece well and that made for good reading. I think that you did a fine job with expressing youremotions that you were feeling at the time this piece was written. Job well done.
Well I enjoyed your story on" Whats For dinner". I marked I have a crock pot. I have enjoyed mine got for many years ago as a Christmas gift. You did a very fine job and I think that you should send it .I love my crock pot as does my husband who cooks with it. I would like for you to stop by my port and check out The Good Wife's Guide 1955. I wrote a letter to them as if I could go back in time,you might like it.Anyway good job keep up the good work .
Cass for your poll "Do you Blog " I marked no. I do not keep a journal online or off. I know that many writers do keep a diary ,but for some reason or another I just have not done so. I do enjoy looking at and reading others blogs. Anyway good question for a poll. Keep up the good job.
Get Smart Fan I enjoyed reading your poem "Ode To My Horse".I think that you did a very fine job on this poem. And I liked it a lot. I think that horses are truely beautiful animals . I once had a pony named Charlie. Anyway I think that you did a good job on this piece. Keep it up.
Forcemaster I like what I have read so far.I think that you have done a good job . I did however notice a typo in the beginning on the word( themselves)you wrote the word twice both times with typos. Other than that all seems good and to have been written well.Keep up the good job.
Ann I liked your poem "Where Were You " and I understood it completely. I think that you did a very fine job on this piece. As one that has been divorced I know the feelings that you wrote about very well. I think that this poem was written well and wrote with love for your friend .Good job on this and I know that you will continue give support to your friend. Good Job keep it up.
On your poll I chose absolute freedom . I think even though I leave in America I have limited freedoms and they are only good in America. That once outside of this country I even have less. Most people that are from other
countries have the freedom to travel any where without being worried about being killed because of where they are from. Good question. Good job.
Earth Angel I liked your poll " I belive " I chose the entire Bible. I do belive that God sent his son Jesus to die for us so that we my go to heaven. I do believe in the Holy Spirit and Angels ,the devil use to be one. I really liked your question and I think that you did a good job on this poll. Keep it up.
Sean on your poll " Milk" I chose to check Good and tasty. I don't drink milk by the glass full by it's self. I drnk it with cookies or a piece of cake. I also drink it after I eat all the cereal out of my bowl. I also will drink with coco but just can't drink it plain. Nice job on the poll. Keep it up.
Kim on your poll " Do You Rate Everything You Read ?" I checked the box Yes,all the time. I thought that was the point of this site not only to post your work but to read others and rate and review . I like to check see where I am on the most active reviewer list. I think that it is fun to read others work and when I am there I might as well rate and review. Good job on the question. Keep it up.
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