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Rated: 13+ | (1.0)
Just to let you know... I was bored half way through. Add some action, and don't be as specific as what kind of adj., etc... that is what is so fun! I like it when the words don't quite fit.

Also... some of the terminology was a bit hard to understand... explain what an "infinitive" is (I hope I spelled that right!)

Otherwise, great job!
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