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Review by MK Lowery Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
That was an enchanting read, and I enjoy reading stories with animals. I used to write short stories with animal characters, but they weren't always well received. Reading this again inspires me to want to write those stories that have meaning.

Anyway, this was great. At the end of the story, there should be quotation marks around that last sentence -"Now, let's go get a saucer of milk."
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Thank you for that Tammy. It's always good to keep Jesus in mind when we celebrate Christmas.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
This poem is refreshing. I like it.

Make sure to capitalize Thanksgiving and make line breaks for the last four lines of the poem to help it flow more smoothly.

Keep writing.
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