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Rated: E | (5.0)
James,

I declined your request for a paid review after I read your essay. Why did I do that? Because after I read it, I realized this essay is a gift for me. In the past two weeks, I've developed a somewhat intensive interest in Haiku and all relating derivatives. They are, certainty, a challenge for me to complete these tiny poems with images that provoke thought. And I'm loving it. However, I know so little about the real knowledge behind these forms and I want to know more. Your essay impressed me with your knowledge. Your writing was clear and to the point. There was something in each paragraph that was informative and made me realize there's more to Haikus then just words that fit the criteria. I hope you don't mind if I print it so I can go deeper into Haiku. Thank you very much for posting it.

Steph
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Brian,

When I read this, I, immediately, connected with these feelings.

It's full of emotions I understand.

Very nice job of writing, thank you for posting it. Makes me feel not so alone.

Steph
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Review of The Moment  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Morning. Mouser,

I loved this poem. Your words tell a lovely story. It flows well, your words show emotions easily understood by the reader.

Thank you for sharing,

Steph
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Review of That Chair There  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hey, Axton

I read your poem out loud, something I always do to see if there's a natural rhythm.

Your poem has a great natural rhythm and each stanza is cohesive throughout the poem. It tells a great story and I enjoyed reading it.

I think you should explore your poetic side. There's poetry in everything you see and feel and experience.

So many different forms of poetry are available, the Poet's Cafe within this site is an excellent way to explore.

I can't wait to see more.

Great job, I must say. Keep going.

Steph

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Review of I Am Still Here  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, depthwriter,

I applaud your courage in putting this out there. So many have experienced the same and can't verbalize it.

I liked the way you used the poem structure and rhyming to deliver your message.

Writing is cathartic for you and is a way to connect with others traveling the same journey.

Your words are important.

Thank you for sharing,

Steph
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Review of Waiting  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Fontaine,

I've read both of your poems, they scream pain.

The words you used, and the structures speak volumes. Please keep writing, encouraging release.

A friend,

Steph
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi, Destiny,

Such a wonderful poem. Your words are in so many of us, yet they show there is hope.

Thank you so very much for writing this. No one's really alone, are they?

GOD is my answer as well.

Steph
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Review of Trayvon Martin  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi,

This poem represented my thoughts exactly. Your words spoke to me about ongoing tragedies that, sadly, continue.

Good choice on using a poetry form that makes an impact.

Great job and, please keep writing.

Stephanie
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Review of Frustration  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hey, Zeke,

This poem is perfect. The construction and rhyming of your thoughts touched me. I can identify with each stanza of frustration.

I'm dealing with a grandson who won't make good choices and just sits, playing video games. Frustration is the right word as I struggle to know how to help.

And I've ended up doing your last line. T should have done it first.

Thank you for writing this, makes me feel I'm not the only one dealing with this.

Your friend,

Steph
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, WakeUpandLive,

I found your poem on Read and Review.

I really like this poem. It flows so nicely with rhythm.

I can picture each step as time separates them and brings them back together.

I haven't seen this poetry form before, but I love the challenge of trying a new one. Would you share what form this is?

Thank you,

Stephanie
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi, Snow,

I found this piece on Read and Review.

You have quite the imagination, I must say. But, more important, it's believable.

I'm not so much into proper grammar (spell-check does that) but in how the words make me feel.

This story tells me I can stretch my imagination in many different directions; thank you for that.



Steph
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Review by green is happy Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)

Hi, Amy,

I do like this poem. The rhythm moves me right along to the end.

Great work.

Stephanie
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Review of Mind Blown  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Amy Jo,

I, totally, understand your confusion. It comes across very well.

I do like how you write. It felt like you were talking to me.

BTW I only watch YouTube for the music and animal rescues (the latter in small amounts).

Stephane
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