so short, but yet so beautiful!!!!! i felt the words coming off of the page. i've done this a lot today, but i am adding you to my fav. authors list. i will be reading more from you soon u i hope!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
that was so great, so flowing> i love how you can write so few words, but they touch me, reach out and wrap them selves around my heart, and my mind. i dont know if i have already, but i am adding you to my favorite authors list. i hope to read more from you in the up coming future!!!!!!!!!
i love how your words flow so smoothly. you are such a good writer, and i keep doing what your doing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i bet the world that your mother loved this!!!!!!!! she probably even cryed . . . . i know exactly how you feel, and every person on this earth is blessed to have a mom!!!!!
thank you for the beautiful words. i dedicate this to all the wonderful mom in this world!!!!!!
youhave stolen the feelings and emotions from my heart and wrote them in this poem. i was so mind gripping so wonderfully written that i just had to add you to my fav. authors. i have a lot of periods on my work, and people tell me that they do not like that . . . . well, the periods in the piece of work are so perfect. they fit just right.
OH, how so beautiful and dazziling this poem was. have you been in love before?????? and than had it taken from you????? i feel that you have, but i cant help but love each and every word that you write. thank you for telling me of this poem!!!!!!! it is so amazing!!!!!
beautiful . . . . but short. if you wanted to, you should add on to this . . . . i believe that this could be even greater, if that is even possible. your words are so graceful and they flow just right. i hope that you have more for me to read, and i hope that you are planning to write more in the future!!!!!!!
i am awstruck by the words you have written. words that have come from the heart, that much i can see. i feel as if you know what i am feeling, the emotions that i have inside, for you have wrote them perfectly on this page. thank you for being a poet, i want to read much more from you.
i completely agree with you, that we should all live in Harmony. i cant even imagine what life would be like it if it were. i guess i'll never find out though. but i wish i could. AH!!!! a pain free life. doesn't that sound good???????
i love your writing . . . . . please . . . . . keep doing what you are doing with that pencil of yours. i hope to read moor from you in the future!!!!!!!
that was CRAZY!!!!! LOL but i loved it so much. your good!! thats all that i have to say. keep up the good work. i'd like to read moor from you in the future!!!!
i envy the way you can repeat words that make the poem even moor perfect. you are going into my favorite authors, and i strongly hope that you have lots moor for me to read, now and in the future.
very beautiful, i'll add you to my favorite authors and look forward to reading moor that you have written. i love the way that your words flow so perfectly, and so powerfully.
you just poured my emotions and feelings into this beautiful and heart gripping poem> im adding you to me favorite authors, and i hope to read moor of your work in the future.
that was confusing but fascinating!!!!!! i like the way you word things, its different and good. please keep writing. i want to read moor!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
this is the best poem i have read in a long time. this is from the soul, i can feel that, if nothing at all. your words come out so perfectly, so smoothly, so . . . . . .
so, BEAUTIFULLY. i have just added you to my favorites, though that does not do you justice at all. your fantastic, so very good at this. you know, writing. please, pick up your pencil, take a piece of paper and write your heart out. i seriously cant wait to read moor. thank you for just being who you are.
that was very detailed!!!!!!! i really likes this poem, you should keep up the good work!!!!!!! i have one suggestion though : in the lat line of the second paragraph
" but is still dont look back " shouldnt the is be i??????? well anyways, that was enjoyable. im on my way to reading moor!!!!!!!!
this was good, but again i really wish that it was longer. sorry if im going on about this but i love your words, how you put things together. i look forward to reading more of your work in the future!!!!!!!!
i know that this is meant to be short, but i like it so much that i wish you would make it longer. this is just my opinion, but some time you should keep going with your words and thoughts.
i love the words that you have, but i strongly wish that you had more there it make this poem dazziling and beautiful. well, more beautiful, anyway. im adding you to my fav authors right now.!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i seen this in the newbie section that lists three in the list of many. by the time that i got the chance to read you i couldn't find you, though i looked for like 10 min. i wanted to read this poem so badly that i kept looking for your poem to come up again. i was so not disapointed, i loved this. it sounds like something that i would write. you should check out my poem Awake when dreaming and asleep while remembering. i think that you would really like it.
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