This was cute. I loved the way the poems flow smoothly with the rhythm. I also enjoy how you connected the idea of love to the comfort of home. Love comes in many ways, a lot which is associated with family, friends, relationships and more. I just love this poem. It is beautifully written, and the music is there. Great job!
Oh my god, yes. This poem while reading it reminds me of a children's rhyme? Like the "itsy-bitsy spider" and or "ring around the rosies." This poem reminds me of such poems due to their innocent yet dark nature. While reading, it had a music to it that as mention before: reminds me of a child. Beautifully written, amazing music, and love the dark story within your poem.
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