My absolute favorite line are: "The pain of the past forced her to keep going. To keep fighting them back." I can relate to this in many different ways. I know what it's like to go through these kind of things but in a different way. Kind of. Either way this is a really good poem. You should keep writing.
I really love this. It's so relatable and is amazing.
"Living in a small town didn't help her case.
Everybody talked.
Therefore, the story continued to change."
I love those lines because I can relate to all of this. In RR, everyone talks and everyone knows your bussiness.
"The scars will remain.
But they are her reminders to stay strong.
Move on."
These are another set of lines that I love. This poem is just full of emotion, and is pure amazing.
I really like this. My favorite line is "ITS HOW WE PUT IT TOGETHER THAT SETS IT APART stand up for each other and be equal as one because nobody is perfect."
This is good. It has some nice imagery. Probably should of worded it different though. Becuase "Wearing a see-thorough nightgown" is not very good. Should have like made it I dont even know. Better.
This is pure imagery. I love it. All of the wording is just great. I love the lines "It feels like an anchor pulling on my heart, as the ship pulls away."
I liked this. It's good. I just dont understand the big words so thats my only problem. My favorite lines are "belive in belief and say that your free." Just amazing.
I had tears come to my eyes reading this. I absolutely love it. The only thing I didn't like was the "fly" part but it still went together in the end. It's great.
This poem is kind of confusing.. Its good but confusing. I understand that its about love but then it goes on to talk about something else. In my opinion it could've been better.
I can honestly relate to this. I love it. I can relate a little bit toward this and I think that it is very well written. Could have been longer but it's still great.
I really love this poem. It has a lot of emotion and makes you feel like your there. That your that person. This poem has absolutely nothing wrong with it to me.
I really like this poem because it's telling you about a woman who was being abused while in a relationship and finally got out of it and was free. The poem tells you just enough so that it's not too crowded but just enough to let you know what's going on in the situation. I think that its very well put together.
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